ch2/page035
Sat, 07 Nov 2020
Re: Still talking about making motivations clear to the reader. I really tried to make it clear that Maikel: Wants Bryn and Siv, but Bryn more, but is focusing on Siv because he knows Bryn is not going to escape.
ch2/page035
Sat, 07 Nov 2020
Re: Still talking about making motivations clear to the reader. I really tried to make it clear that Maikel: Wants Bryn and Siv, but Bryn more, but is focusing on Siv because he knows Bryn is not going to escape.